help with a poem please?

Well it depends on who you are but here is what i would do...

I am unique in my own way and a splendid person

I wonder about life and how everything is what it is

I hear gusts of wind against my window in the cold winter storm

I see rainbow streaks coming toward me as I blank out

I want more macs even though i have 4

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I pretend i am a princess

I feel a strong vibe when i am kissing the one i love

i touch smooth hands as i walk to class with him ;)

I worry i might lose everyone i love

i cry cries when im happy and when im sad

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i understand that nobodys perfect

i say that people should be treated equally

i dream that someday there will be world peace and everyone will be happy

i try to make the best of every situation

i hope that most of my dreams will come true

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i know that sounds kinda corny and gay and some lines i had trouble with but maybe you could use some of the lines if you like any of them

PLEAS COME ANSWER MY QUESITON I NEED HELP ASAP ON THE CRUCIBLE AND PLEASE TELL FRIENDS TO COME LOOK AT MY QUESTION!!!

I am responsible and caring

I wonder what the future will be like

I hear the air blow

I see the rainbow next to me (sorry that one was lame cant think of anything else)

I want (dont know wat u desire ) to be able to find love someday

I am liable (or trustworthy) and compassionate

I pretend to listen in class ( lol : D )

I feel the sun hit me like a flame of fire

I touch (isnt touch the same as feel oh well i guess not) Gods' hand around mine (dont know if u wud want to pick something bout god)

I worry about the end of the world (: P)

I cry for all the abused people in the world

I am responsible and caring

I understand that we all have to leave this world someday

I say friends and family are the most important things in life

I dream about the day i get out of school (lol)

I try to be a better person everyday

I hope to make a difference in other peoples lives

I am responsible and caring

(sorry im a little corny lol but i hoped this helps )

can u plz answer mine??

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Avz2G...

I am HATED AND HAVE A WIERD GIFT

i wonder I WONDER WHO GAVE ME THIS GIFT WHITCH IS LIKE A CURSE

I hear WHISPERS OF HOW I AM NOTHING WORTH

I see HATRED TO THE PEOPLE WHO SHOWED ME MY GIFT

I want TO KNOW WHY I WAS CHOOSEN OF BILLIONS

I am WORTHLESS I AM NOTHING

I pretend I PRETEND THIS IS ALL AN NIGHTMARE

I feel I COULD BE THE PERSON I ONCE WAS

I touch MY HEART AND IT IS EMPTY AND FULL OF HATRED

I worry THAT THERE IS NO WAY PUTTING THINGS RIGHT AGAIN

I cry WHEN I THINK ABOUT MY BROTHER THAT WAS TAKEN FROM ME

I am THE ONE U CAN SEE THE THOUGHTS AND FEEL MY EMOTIONS

I understand I UNDERSTAND MY GIFT WAS GIVEN TO ME TILL I DIE

I say TO PEOPLE THAT IVE HAD ENOUGH OF THIS CURSE

I dream THAT IT WAS ALL A DREAM I EVEN WAKE UP IN MY DRAEM AND DREAMING ALL THAT HAPPENED WAS A DREAM

I try NOT TO FORGIVE THE BASTARDS FOR WHAT THEY DONE BUT I CANT

I hope PEOPLE WILL COME TO ME AND EXPLAIN EVERYTHING I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT WHY I WAS THE CHOOSEN ONE AND WHY THEY WHERE SO CRUEL

I am THE MOST UNFAMOUS FAMOUS GUY IN THE WORLD

For me a poem has to have rhythm. It does not always ought to rhyme but it surely demands to hit my feelings. I consider readability of expression is main as good. I do not love to moment wager what I'm studying approximately. I constantly seem for what I time period "poetic gem stones"within the textual content.

holycrap we did that in la/ss ... o____o;;

but. just put simple words in at first.

&then go back and use the thesaurus to make them all better.

that's what i did xD &i got an A. lawl.

oh and i centered mine around a certain theme.

( procrastinating on homework )

so you could try that too. ;D