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Do You Like My Country Song?
ARTIST: JON MALCOM
TITLE: RUNNING IN FIELDS
I woke up again night
Having a nightmare about last nights firefight
Three men dead the streets we’re red
Fire everywhere but I close my eyes and I almost hear
Chorus:
Momma saying “honey, suppers ready”
Dad asking if I wanna play catch
My dog licking my face on the front porch
I’m giving his head a scratch
And then I take your hand
Look into your eyes that’s my shield
And dream of you and me running through fields
Running away from all the bullets
Running away from all the pain
Running away from the all the fire
I’ll see what this dream yields…
When we go running in fields…
Working overtime is in my job description
For the pain in my heart there’s no prescription
I just try to do my job the best I can
Caring for my brothers, every woman and man
Spreading freedom from sea to sea
But that doesn’t bring you back to me
But I can almost hear:
Chorus:
Momma saying “honey, suppers ready”
Dad asking if I wanna play catch
My dog licking my face on the front porch
I’m giving his head a scratch
And then I take your hand
Look into your eyes that’s my shield
And dream of you and me running through fields
Running away from all the bullets
Running away from all the pain
Running away from the all the fire
I’ll see what this dream yields…
When we go running in fields…
Sitting here in my tent
Pouring my love into letters
Even though my soul’s been spent
I’ll still feel better
Because every time I put the pen to paper I close my eyes can almost hear
Chorus:
Momma saying “Honey, suppers ready.”
Dad asking if I wanna play catch
My dog licking my face on the front porch
I’m giving his head a scratch
And then I take your hand
Look into your eyes that’s my shield
And dream of you and me running through fields
Running away from all the bullets
Running away from all the pain
Running away from the all the fire
I’ll see what this dream yields…
When we go running in fields…
Ohhh
When we go running in fields…
5 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
You have a great hook and great story line. A tip I can give you is to try to keep each line of each verse as close to the same sylablle count as possible... ie. Line 1 of Verse 2 should have the same amount or close to the same amount of sylablles as Line of of Verse 1. This helps the melody to flow from verse to verse. Great Work, and once again Great Song!!!!!
Source(s): Nashville Songwriters Assoc. International. nashvillesongwrites.com - El TecoloteLv 71 decade ago
A similar song was quite popular almost 40 years ago:
Galveston, oh Galveston, I still hear your sea winds blowin'
I still see her dark eyes glowin'
She was 21 when I left Galveston
Galveston, oh Galveston, I still hear your sea waves crashing
While I watch the cannons flashing
I clean my gun and dream of Galveston
I still see her standing by the water
Standing there lookin' out to sea
And is she waiting there for me?
On the beach where we used to run
Galveston, oh Galveston, I am so afraid of dying
Before I dry the tears she's crying
Before I watch your sea birds flying in the sun
At Galveston, at Galveston
Keep going. Don't give up. Sell it. Every rejection just gets you that much closer to a sale. Jimmy Webb, I'm sure, was turned away by a whole slew of stupid execs before the above masterpiece actually sold and Glen Campbell got ahold of it.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Yeah.
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