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Im having trouble writing a thesis statement for this essay topic?
"is america truly the land of the free" im saying that america is not the land of the free
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- rominaLv 41 decade agoFavorite Answer
You can write about racism and ageism, zenophobia against immigrants, and the poor getting poorer, the marginalization of the mentally ill, the lack of racial representation in the legislature, the lack of public health care, etc....
The thesis/summary would sound something like "Nothing is free in America. In a land where only the wealthiest can afford healthcare, where the poor are marginalized and denied educational opportunities, and those of advanced age or suffering from illness are allowed to fall through a failing social safety net, America is letting its' people down. Only those who have the money and power needed to capitalize on the suffering and labor of others are truly 'free' in America."
The last sentence is the THESIS STATEMENT.
Source(s): Good luck! - 1 decade ago
I understand your problem... We have: the best legal system MONEY can Buy... the best health care MONEY can Buy... the best spin doctoring of the truth MONEY can Buy... the most brainwashed people MONEY can Buy... the best dental care MONEY can Buy... the best standard of living MONEY can Buy...
To learn the truth of how old Honest Abe sold out the power of the State Government under the Constitution and moved it to the Federal Government while claiming it to be about Slavery was a master stroke. This one document (Emancipation Proclamation http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Emancipation_Proclama... ), that you have to be a master legal researcher to understand the truth behind the words, did not free anyone! It in fact enslaved the non-land owning Whites, Blacks, and Asians alike, everyone but the Native Americans.
And poor Motorcycle riders like myself have to wear a brain bucket because some kid is too foolish to not ride in a safe way? Then if I get into a car, I am forced to wear a seat belt... Chilod proofing adults makes for a people who cannot think for themselves... the less than intelligent should be allowed to kill themselves off...
ME!
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