What do you like best about the seasons?

I like this John. It is good to read something from you. I would suggest concluding with the the first two lines.

I see it like this:-

The whisper of pines in soft Winter wind,

The roar of rivers when Spring comes again,

The riot of songbirds in Summer nest,

And crackle of Fall leaves when trees take rest.

Savor the music that all seasons sing!

Favor the songs with your ear as they ring!

change ear to ears

one cool thing you could do is pluralize the words, make it like this:

Savor the music that all seasons sing!

Favor the songs with your ears as they ring!

The whispers of pines in soft Winter's winds,

The roars of rivers when Spring comes again,

The riots of songbirds in Summer's nests,

And the crackle of leaves in Fall when trees rest.

what do you think? it's really good either way, good job

The death of summer bleeds

orange on the falling leaves

catch a good vibe

get alive with the autumn breeze

I do like this, the sounds, sights, a feast of images which are real...hats off!

This is a good one so early in my morning!

Good Moening...6:43a.m.