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I drew my attention to his hand on mine, while my stomach was doing somersaults I managed to agree and say “ Yeah I’d like that” . Nate grinned and pulled me up from the couch I picked up a Corona from the cooler and surprisingly in my free hand I felt Nate’s. I followed his lead and he walked me up the steps and he took me into a dark room with boxes piled up everywhere. At first I was confused because I thought we were just going to sit in the backyard, but I was feeling spontaneous so I just went with it. I felt his hand slide from mine and I stood still and my blue eyes were searching everywhere around the room for him. My thought process was interrupted by a creaking noise, I turned my head to find the source was an old dusty window that Nate was cracking open and was begin crawling through it. I walked in front of it and inquired “Nate how am I supposed to get through there?” He jumped out and reassured “Don’t worry Isabella, I’ll help you first then I’ll go.”

loose around his neck and all of a sudden he flipped me over so he was on top. I felt every muscle on his body embrace me, soon enough he nervously tore off his shirt. I looked deep into Nate’s eyes and opened my mouth I tried to sputter out the words “I love you” but I just couldn’t, with my mouth opened he pulled me in closer and began kissing passionately… I never knew that saying that I love you would be so difficult I mean they’re only three little words that are supposed to mean so much but I wanted to show Nate the way I felt about him in something more than words. People try to express it in the way they touch them or the way they can look in their eyes and not say anything for hours but know that with eyes locked in silence could express way more of a truth than you could ever say. You know you are in love when your heart fully controls you and your brain tries to pass through with thoughts of reason but you block out any doubts with the pure impulse of passion and lust and

He put his hand on my lower back which made my blood run hot, and coaxed me out. Once I was on the roof I put the Corona down and brushed some dirt off my knee. Nate came out and lied down beside me and swung his arm around me. I bit my lip and couldn’t help but look in his eyes again, and the damn stars made them twinkle even more. He pulled me in closer to him; I’ve never felt more at home in my life. Nate told me that the fireworks would be starting in forty-five minutes or so. To pass the time we finished the Corona and I kicked it off the roof making sure nobody was below it that could potentially get injured. As we started to sober up we began talking about the basic things that come up, school, family, friends. We could not stop cracking up at each other’s stories, I’ve been talking to the guy for less than twenty minutes and I already felt like we had a connection that used to be impossible for me to even imagine, Nate’s the kind of guy who knows exactly what to say at the

who knows exactly what to say at the right time. Nate Hanson, an acquaintance, was becoming everything I want and everything I need. I was falling for him fast, and I felt doubtful. We were both completely sober by now. Then as the night went on, we got into more serious, complex stuff, like couples, relationships and love. I had my head against his chest when he asked me what my opinion on love is. I took a deep breath and answered “Love at first sight is easy to understand; it's when two people have been looking at each other for a lifetime that it becomes a miracle. I was staring at the stars as I continued “Love… love is just as much an object of obsession, many seek it, few find it, and the lucky ones who do never ever forget it. If you have love in your life it can make up for a great many things you lack. If you don't have it, no matter what else there is, it's not enough.” I realized how mixed up my answer must’ve sounded but Nate just glanced at me astonishment. I looked back

I looked back at him, instantly connected. Tyler, Nate’s best friend shouted up to us “Yo Nate I’m about to set off the first firework” I sat up to get a better view but I saw Nate was still laying down his hand still placed ready for me to lay there again. I scooted back and returned to my rightful place, in Nate’s arm. His face lit up, and knowing I was the one to make his face light up, I couldn’t help but letting out a huge grin. The fireworks started, I heard them and saw them. Although the fireworks have started a while ago for me, I felt those ones. I was falling for Nate hard and I felt nervous. I wanted to get back to the moment we were in, so I repeated the question he asked me. Nate placed his hand on my chin and tilted my head towards his; he didn’t release it until our eyes were locked. Then he declared “I think just because you know someone doesn’t mean you love them, and just because you don’t know people doesn’t mean you can’t love them. You can fall in love with a

complete stranger in a heartbeat, if that’s the route that is planned for you, so people need to open their hearts to strangers more often. You never know what life will throw at you.” Neither of us blinked the whole time he was talking. I blocked out everything, the fireworks, jocks screaming, the butterflies in my stomach, the sweat on my palms, the gorgeous night sky, the maximum amount of feelings I felt for Nate and how hard I was trying not to act on them, everything but his voice. He closed his eyes and leaned in; I slightly licked my lips, titled my head to the right, and fell in love with Nate. Once we pulled away from the most amazing kiss ever, Nate looked in my eyes and whispered something but I was still stunned from the kiss so I had no idea what he said, I was going with whatever crazy force was controlling me and I grabbed his hand. He kissed my forehead then we both crawled back inside the window. Once in the room again I leaned up against the wall Nate put his hands

on my hips and we started making out. He started kissing my neck and I got chills. I was falling for Nate faster, harder, and I loved the feeling of it. We rearranged to several spots around the room and somehow managed not to trip over anything with our eyes closed and mind only focused on each other, while still making out Nate led me to the hallway, everything was moving in fast motion, or slow motion I don’t know whichever’s better. The intensity of our passion was insane; against the railing I was thrusting myself at Nate. He intertwined his fingers through mine and was staring into my eyes and beginning to breathe slightly heavier. I saw that we were going into Kara’s brother, Chase who is a sophomore at college’s room. This was a good choice because there’s no risk of anyone walking in on us. I knew what was going on, I was fully aware of what was about to happen. I couldn’t process anything except how much I loved Nate, and I knew he loved me, I could tell by the way he looked

at me and it’s almost as if I could feel what he was thinking… and it’s the same things that were racing through my mind. Once we entered Chase’s room I pressed Nate against the door and slid my hand behind him and locked the door. We were talking throughout this whole process; my mind was only focused on me and Nate that I wasn’t going to let anything, even what he was saying ruin this for me, I knew I was saying stuff too but I wasn’t paying attention, we would laugh a little sometimes for no reason just after a kiss or something. I was up against the wall again as we began making out again. It was like our bodies were two magnets and the electric charge wanted us closer and closer, we were never more than an inch apart. I walked gracefully to the bed and Nate followed me. I straddled him and we began making out hard, our mouths were colliding, I took off my shirt so I was just in my tank top, his hands were running up and down my back until he rested them on my hips. My arms were

and when you finally work up the courage to tell the person you just end up stuttering on a choked up mess of feelings and emotions that make you fall even more helplessly in love. I assumed Nate knew what I was trying to say, because he looked me dead in the eye and said “I love you Isabella”, that’s probably the only thing he said that I actually remembered and took in. I slid off my tank top since my shorts were already off I was just in my bra now, I used to be self conscious but Nate didn’t love me for that and plus when I was with Nate I felt beautiful and worry free. Then I pulled Nate in closer to me, so we were sitting there in our underwear, making out. Nate was reaching in his Abercombie&Fitch jeans and pulling out a Trojan, he looked at me his eyes searching for some type of reaction, and I nodded, that’s all my body could physically come up with due to all the adrenaline rush. He took off his jeans while kissing my check, I followed by example and took off my bra,

so we were sitting there in our underwear, making out. Nate was reaching in his Abercombie&Fitch jeans and pulling out a Trojan, he looked at me his eyes searching for some type of reaction, and I nodded, that’s all my body could physically come up with due to all the adrenaline rush. He took off his jeans while kissing my check, I followed by example and took off my bra, so there we were, sitting on the bed making out topless. We both started sweating as we removed the last trace of any clothes. So they we were lying on the bed, naked, while a symphony of heavy breathing and teen hearts beating circled around the room, but this time we weren’t just making out.