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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Sometime it's nice to miss what you are waiting for?

Underway chasing the horizon

passing diamonds on the way

Floating along safe in a steel palace

painted battleship grey

Smoking lamp lit

mostly it's not

drilling and counting

moving cargo about

Looking at warships

designed to go in harms way

Me just on a target

just trying to stay out of the way

We di our jobs and had some laughs

always kept a wary eye

never fired a shot

nor provoked a glance

just floated on the waves

We were warriors fighting a war

that wasn't oh so hot

so we just held our breaths

contemplating what if

We knew that we would have no home-port to return

If Trinity was called

This is for those that waited and served

crossed fingered on the wall

Thank you for any coments

Update:

L21 should be "what if " removed

"first shot" instead

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    This reminded me

    of a 'short calendar'

    my paternal grandfather

    kept in Korea.

    He still has it.

  • .
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    You were trained and ready; that's what an armed force is. You described the camaraderie as well as any I've seen - and the anxiety of not knowing from one day to the next, or one hour.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Reminds me of the Merchant Marine - delivering goods (in war zones) - arms being minimal - due to the demand on space. ♥

    http://www.dvrbs.com/monuments/camden/CamdenMMback...

  • 1 decade ago

    You brought back memories when i was in the Royal Navy, thank you, they were some good times and this was a good read.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    you are a mighty warship

    on a peaceful morning cruise

    perhaps your war is over

    but somehow we all lose

    even if victorious

    we lay down our arms

    the fighting just starts up again

    i'm waiting for the alarm...

  • 1 decade ago

    Thank-you Hugs for your service!

  • 1 decade ago

    Wonderful! Thank you for your service.x.

  • This is a really good poem! I do like it :) good job!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    A needed read.

  • 1 decade ago

    the fact is...

    you were willing to go in harms way if that were needed.

    THANK YOU.

    ALL means ALL who serve, not just those in harms way...

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