Critique or opinions of my poem please?

Unpublished work Copyright © 2010 by the author

This smoky sensuous quality

cascading across my senses,

weaving in and out of perception,

glorifying this moment in time,

electrifying every cell inside.

I'm finding it harder to move

wading through what you leave behind every time you come around.

I'm finding it harder to know which way is up and which is down.

Causing me to see with my hands

and to feel with my eyes.

The scent of your thoughts linger...

longer than the sounds of your fragrance.

You waves repeatedly break upon

the hidden shores within my mind.

The storms inside unleashed

time after time after time.

No longer barricaded against your forces,

those heavy walls long since battered down

I've conceded to float along the unknown paths

upon which your currents flow round.