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Does a poem need proper grammar to be worthy?
(tongue in cheek to a question posted on another site bemoaning the lack of grammar, etc. in poems being posted)
Poet Speak
Oh…treacherous trail, teach us truth
Make our feet trod your sacred ground
Let us see your divinity
Punctuate words with proper ways
Syntax us to death to reveal
dependent clauses that don’t belong
Reject the phrase that speaks to all
if a comma’s gone or slang wails
Begin again to diagram
For we must measure the grammar
and disregard the words that speak
else we may never grow as poets
Good answer hp, but you need more punctuation! Now go to the back of the class!
14 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
so you say, today's the day
you have something
important to say
well get it out
don’t hesitate
but please, oh please
do punctuate
offer a passage, packed with drama,
or a snippet to tell, of the comma
perhaps a tale, of words stolen
left unnoticed, without a colon
a simple poem, to tell your station
with wise words, worthy of quotation
or a subtle song, singing the praises
of seldom used, hyphenated phrases
a piece filled, with energy kinetic
wrapped in hands, holding you parenthetic
something golden, hidden in your stash
with whimsical words, joined with a dash
tell of sweet Love, covered in kisses
held in pauses, with well used ellipsis
cool blue passion, set off in the dark
wonder left hanging, with a question mark
so if today, is the day
for you to say
something your way
do it with style
make it sound great
but please, oh please
do punctuate
- jennyLv 71 decade ago
I'm hanging on to my sense of humor,
as I read Neonman, and all these answers
clever words, dots and dashes and etc.
Feeling over my head and at a loss to
expess, what, how, where. just make it clear
is all I hope for, But how I do, I do, so enjoy
the Masters! here and in the olden books.
- ?Lv 61 decade ago
Good morning, Neonman, and a belated holiday greeting to you! Fun writing this morning. I love HP's response, too. I try to punctuate, but, with my high school education fails me sometimes as does my memory.
Source(s): your friend, shirley - Anonymous1 decade ago
...grammar should be a beacon, much like a lighthouse to a poets words...a guide, nothing more...it should be an inconspicuous bodyguard that adds to the experience...there are exceptions...Black Mountain Poets, for example, who have written works that reflect mountain jargon and these works are phenomenal
- *Jellz*Lv 61 decade ago
hehehe I love it when something gets up your nose Neon! Your passion for poetry is obvious and... so right! cheers J
S1 tread instead of trod? (sorry I couldn't help it LOL)
and how is it spelt? Miscreant or Misc Rant? LOL
- Anonymous1 decade ago
The poem should be how the poet talks day to day.. or how the character in the p[oem would talk.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
i believe poetry is a form of expression... i say feel free to punctuate however you like... emily dickinson... a very popular poet... used a lot of hyphens and other techniques in her poetry and ended up created her own style... be creative and enjoy yourself...
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Ahahhaha....
That "tutto poesia" site
is more boring
than shopping at Ross.
Comma, quotation
period at the end
the slash on the tip
will never mend.
.
.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Wow, self-satire?