Your opinion would be appreciated on this plesant horror story i wrote?

There was once a man named seymour. He lived in a dimly lit underground mine. He only came out between 1am and 4am, and he feasted on souls of small amish childern and puppies. The police didnt know why there was so many random amish corpses of small children and puppies littering the streets near the mine. So one day one of the cops has the wise idea to go into the mine. He gets to an abandoned shack inside the mine, He opens it to find a sleeping man about 8'6 and looking about 140 pounds, very malnourished and sickly. He awoke the man and attempted to question him. The man got up and knocked him out with surprising strength. The cop awoke terrified tied to a chair outside the mine, it was 1:39 am and the murderer was directily in front of him with a knife and some lemons. He then slowly skinned the cop alive and drenched him in lemon juice. Then he placed the skinless cop in the lobby of the police station, he cut the power and ran away. The cop watching the station tried to help him because he was skinless and screaming in pain but as soon as the cop touched him he burst into flames and burned to death, also lighting his friend on fire and when the cop got the flames off him he looked at his skinless co-worker who is now a pile of charred flesh,ash,and bones on a chair. So the dead cops partner goes into the cave with 3 other cops to investigate, and they got deep in the cave and found nothing, so they begin to leave when they heard a sickening noise, they turned around to see one of the cops dead by a pick axe into one temple and outside the other. so they get out their guns and start yelling. but the cop just slumps down and nobody is there. So they do deeper and start to investigating when one of the other cops goes missing, so now its just 2 cops left and as the partner is about to leave and wait for backup the cop next to him gets a pick-axe driven through the roof of his mouth and out of the forehead and blood sprayed all over the partner, so he runs out and then re-enters with backup. they find nothing so he leaves. back at his house he hears a noise around 2:47 am, he wakes up to check it out, he goes downstairs and sees his wife and kids, also one of the cops that went missing, the cop was skinned alive and his muscle fibers were being ripped out by fish hooks, it was still happening while he watched in shock. Then the murderer drenched the victim in saltwater and vinegar and ripped out his eyes with fishhooks, then he takes the partners gun that he stole and shot the cop in the back of the head, then he moved on to the son. He peeled off the kids face using his long dirty broken fingernails. He then ate the kids flesh. The partner just watched because he was injected with a drug that paralyzed him by an accomplace that got into the house while the cop was being killed and stabbed him in the back with the drug, he watched as his son slowly was eaten alive. The the wife was forced to drink hydrochloric acid and it melted her organs. then as he about killed the cop the swat team broke down the door and chased him out, he amazingly got away because he was quick and agile. Then the drug wore off and the Partner drove to the cave, got a shotgun, and charged into the cave. He found it littered with the brutalized bodies of tons of swat team members.Then the killer charged him with a pick-axe and he shot him with his shotgun. he stumbled but kept running. The cop then unloaded 7 more slugs into him and he dropped. He then took the pick-axe and bashed it through his skull. As he was leaving the killer got up and threw the pick-axe into his kneecap shattering it. The partner fell to the floor. Then the killer ripped out his intestines and strangled him to death with them. Then he went back into the cave to find a barely alive swat member. He ripped out his veins and flossed with them. Then he shoved a dead puppy down the swat members throat. Then he found another lucky survivor groaning in agony and ripped his skull in half. He lived quietly in the mine feasting on the town police force for many years after that.

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