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Comment on my second attempt at poetry?
Perched on line, looking for prey, scouting
Circle high, swoop in fast, barely seen
beside the prey, heart pulled, blood on beak
smile on face, tinge of guilt, damage done
2 Answers
- Experto CredoLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
I would play withthe formatting more, but I like the tone of it
- leLv 45 years ago
no longer precisely up there with Dylan Thomas's "Do no longer pass soft into that nicely night time", in spite of the shown fact that of course no longer a nasty attempt for a established try. like the earlier individual suggested, Villanelles are very complicated to jot down down. keep at it, and must be look into writing approximately regardless of extra intense or emotional, once you think approximately that i believe this diverse variety is extra suited for that style of ingredient.
