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Feedback on this poem please :)?
Opinions, good or bad, are welcome. I just want to know what I need to improve on and what I did well. Thanks :)
Map to my heart
He took it,
That map to my heart,
And cupid,
Shot me with that dart.
Now I'm under his spell,
Falling so deep,
Until he lets me go,
And I am left to weep.
I dont think he'll find it,
Or even try,
I just wish he had the decency
To tell me goodbye.
I've lost it,
That map to my heart,
This boy has it,
I think he ripped it apart.
And cupids arrow,
Is still stabbed in my back,
Now my heart is breaking,
WIth every little crack
5 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Wow....this is really really good. Very vivid! I hope this poem isn't true. If so that guy needs to get his *** kicked!!!
- Anonymous1 decade ago
I think that is a really well written poem, it rhymes and it makes sense.
Source(s): my heart - Anonymous1 decade ago
That is a really good poem.
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