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here is a special poem...pls rate it...?

i don't know where you are

you are so special and so far

waiting for u i spent all these days

keeping my fingers cross

about you i always dream

loosing patience sometimes i even scream

all i want to say is- come soon and take me away

and be with me come what may...

ok now that u have read it..how is it ? do u like it?

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  • 1 decade ago
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    "all i want to say is- come soon and take me away" amen to that.

    everyone is going romantic ,must be the virus valentinosis behind it.

    anyway good one,better than my first attempt.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Wonderful..!! It's really amazing..!! I loved it.. I don't know why but to me it sounds like my own story... May be because even I'm waiting for that special one to come and take me away.. Sometimes even I loose my patience I just cry out... Even I really wish that he would be with me no matter what might happen.. My fingers are crossed too..!!

  • 1 decade ago

    Sometimes, to get to the other side of good and better poetry, we need to cross the bridge of cliches. So dont stop writing, walk on, keep posting because if you persevere, you'll get there... surely.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Keep writing, the more you practice the more accomplished you will become. Pleasant but nothing special

  • 1 decade ago

    Hey Cute girl its really cute poem like.

    Very sweet.

    100/100

    very nice word and emotions

  • Kane
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    Cute poem , as desiboy said.

    Keep Writing.

  • 1 decade ago

    Even though I like dark poems, I really like it!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    10 on 10

    The poem is as cute as yourself

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Personally, I don't like it very much. The subject has been done so many times, it's not very deep and meaningful, but it gets the point across, so...

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