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Please comment on my love song. Be kind?
Love Song.
HE TO SHE
My dear one,
In your garden
I breathed
Sweet fragrance.
Fruit and honey
Make a feast
Of delight.
Let me drink deep
The wine
Of your love
Raise your voice and sing to life and love
SHE to HE
Wake up my strong one,
Who defends my honour.
Come to my garden
of delight.
Let your fragrance mingle
With nectar and honey.
Feast on the precious
Fruit of love.
Raise your voice and sing to life and love
3 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
It is definitely intense and full of emotion. Honestly I see it more like a poem or like.... i dont know how to explain it in english..... like a choeur in french. More like singing the poem not much like a song. But its incredible, nice choice of words and everything.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Kate i would have liked that to be sung softly to me laying on my pillow.
"Feast on the precious fruits of love"
Something i have done all my life, and believe it is the secret of longevity
IF!! there is anything more relaxing and beautiful, then either God kept i back for himself; or it is saved for us in the after life.
Regrettably very late evening of my life i no longer have a lover to share these wonderful moments of bliss.
I could not be kinder Kate.
- LolaLv 61 decade ago
Fascinating, original
and OH so romantic-
What a delightful exchange
between two devoted lovers.
I love the line
"Wake up my strong one
Who defends my honour."
