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i have a poem. im a little rusty from not writing in a few months but i need oponions?
im brain dead but i just had an urge to write. its how i feel about music. it doesnt have a title. i know it sucks but i dont need you to tell me that. i cant seem to think of the right words tonight but here it is.
i feel it. i feel the fury.
the rage.
the passion.
i feel the words, the rhythym,
surge through me.
the sensation overwhelms.
i feel the steadiness.
i listen.
the intensity is astounding
its loud.
im breathless.
its not done, obviousley. but i just wanted to share and get oponions
skittles: i guess im saying that because im usually happy with what i write but not so much this poem. i just wanted to write because i have a huge passion for music, but like i said; im brain dead. i also said it sucked because im scared of getting bad oponions on my writing because i put a lot into it, even if it doesnt show in this poem. i dont like people reading what i write because i always thinks it sucks even though it doesnt most of the time (i've been published) and im young so im not expierenced. i just wanted to get oponions here, since i dont know these people personally so they're oponions dont mean quite as much to me even though i do appreciate them.
B: screw you. kthanks.
3 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
It had a good rhythm to it, but I think it needs more images.
- UnicornfieldLv 71 decade ago
Right now My brain isn't working properly. But you said you know it sucks then why are you asking? Not that I think it sucks too I'm just wondering... Like I said, my brain isn't working right so no comment.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!