Are these lyrics good enough for big time ?

Everyday workout,

Gloves out.

Punch that bag till my nuckel's bleed,

Aint never gunna fleed.

Going from zero too hero,

All in the moment

Dont sleep,

Or ya gunna bleed,

Gunna feel the pain.

Bloods following through my veins.

Ima fighter and a writer.

Stand up for my rights and beliefs,

Pray ta God ta help me,

He's my saviour.

Ima try save ya,

Before iwaste ya.

Every second counts,

Beat this Mountain,

Beat this Rock.

And soon i'll be on my way too the top.

I aint never gunna drop.

Ya'll better fear me,

So hear me.

Ya'll never win cos,

I aint gunna lose.

Thats right !

This your boy "DERAIL"

Aint gunna fail.

Ima fight till the day I die,

Ya witness these aint lies.

This is the truth and nothing but it,

Like my hands on the Bible.

This is the survival of the fittest,

And nothing but this.

Im still standing on my two feet,

Cos I fight too this beat,

That moves my feet.

Motivates my soul,

And thats my one goal.

Too beat ya down

And be the last one standing in the ring

So you better bring,

All of it, not just some of it.

Or ya gunna get beat tonight,

Cos I aint gunna lose a fight !