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Brandon and Lauren were walking along the beach in Cabo after only a couple short hours of sleep. It was early morning, a little before seven o'clock, and the sun was making its steady ascension into the purple-trimmed sky. They stopped and stood still, watching the sun's labored rise. Brandon's arm held firmly around Lauren's waist and she had a glowing smile found its way onto her cheeks. He kissed her neck and closed his eyes peacefully, letting the breeze brush against his face. "I'm so lucky," he said quietly, breaking their long-standing silence. She turned around in his arms and faced him. He tilted her chin upward towards his mouth and he encased hers with a kiss, letting his hands cup her waist. The sound of the waves crashing onto the shore and the birds singing completed the perfectness of the moment. Brandon pulled back and smiled at her, knowing words couldn't possibly add anything more to the moment. She laid her head against his chest and let his beating heart drown out all the other background noise the beach provided. As the sun lit up the sky, Brandon pulled her back from him and took her hands in his. His fingers danced around her engagement ring and he smiled. "It looks great on your finger," he said. Lauren nodded, "Sure does." She looked up at him, letting her eyes do all the smiling. "I love you so much and I know I'm far from perfect," he started, "but I hope you know how much you mean to me. I hope you always know just how I love you and I always you always feel special and happy because of me." The emotion of the moment took Lauren by surprise and she felt her eyes feel with tears. "You know you're the best thing to ever happen to me, right?" he asked. She just nodded as a tear slipped down her sun-brushed cheek. He raised his thumb to her face and brushed the tear away, catching the second one before it had a chance to fall. He tilted his head down until his lips met hers and held them there for a long moment. They became lost in the moment and Brandon let his tongue slip gently into her mouth. It wasn't wet or sloppy, however. The kiss still held all of its gentle easiness. Lauren removed herself from the kiss, leaving Brandon hungry for more of her. His thumb found the tiny strap on her flowing dress and wandered over it. He smiled and nodded back towards their condo. She nodded in silent agreement and they walked hand in hand back to the beachfront estate. As soon as they were inside, his hands were working their way across her physique. They stumbled their way into the bedroom and he laid her down on the bed. As his weight rested over her, her hands found the protruding elastic band of his boxers. Her hands traveled across the band and then below, finding the button of his jeans. She took a few moments to unclasp it and then swiftly removed the coarse blue pants. They fell to the floor with a soft thud.

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