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I need a thesis for descriptive essay on pentecostal church. I have no idea what my thesis statement?

I have an essay that is due in hours and I need help with my thesis statement. I am not sure what my thesis should be. I am writing a descriptive essay on a Pentecostal Church.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    The people speak in tongues and they praise God consistently throughout the pastor's sermon. Some people pray at the front of the church at the altar while the pastor is preaching. They believe in laying hands of their people so they will be healed. They believe in casting out demons. They believe in anointing with oil. They believe that everything Jesus did, they can do.

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    1 decade ago

    The thesis statement is the statement which your whole essay is about. For example, you are trying to tell people a Church is beautiful, your thesis statement would be a Church is beautiful, then you have paragraphs on different reasons why a Church is beautiful. A good essay is all about trying to get the statement across by supporting the statement. I can't really tell you your thesis unless I've read your essay. Try not to talk about many many things that have nothing to do with your thesis statement. Next time when you write your essay, think of the thesis statement & the supporting details or evidence first, then write your essay. (Do some planning, it'll help so much.)

    Source(s): Send me your essay, and I'll see what I can do. Try this link: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I would help you, but you need to show me your POV and evidence. A thesis is

    POv------------------------------- Evidence, Evidence, and Evidence.

    So if my topic was capital punishment

    Capital punishment should be legal in all states because it saves money, reserves land, and decreases crime rate.

    For a descriptive essay

    Topic----------------------------- description/point, description/point, and description/point

    If my topic was on Carl Sagan

    Carl Sagan, also called the "Man of the Cosmos", was a cosmologist, evolutionist, and an atheist.

    then you talk about the 3 points you made in the body.

    Hope this helped!

    Btw, the essay doesn't have to have 3 points, descriptions, or evidence. Just enough to get your message across to the reader.

  • 1 decade ago

    Spend some time reading about the church. Write down some things about the nature and history of the church. Then string it together into a coherent essay expressing your conclusions about those things.

    Good luck.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Pentecostalism has benefited to spiritual lives of Christians over the centuries.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    How about "History and Origins of the Pentecostal Movement". It is quite new, so it doesn't have a very long history.

  • 1 decade ago

    Write about a dear dear place that is close to The Lord Jesus Christ Almighty's Heart--Westboro Baptist Church.

    God Hates Fags

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    All I know is that pentacostals are nuts.

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