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Persuasive Essay Attention Getter?

I am having a really hard time thinking of a good attention getter for my essay. I'm writing an essay about why my school district should donate money to the Guide Dogs of America. Can anyone help me out?

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  • 1 decade ago
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    First Paragraph- Gives dogs a home

    Second Paragraph- Helps Blind People

    Third Paragraph- Helps Unite America by giving blind people some of the same abilities as most Americans

    good luck!

    ♠emz♠

  • 4 years ago

    start up out with a quick tale like follows... think of, you reside to tell the story a farm for all your existence. Your 9 years previous, and you have a ideal chum. Her call is Betsy, and she or he's a cow. you have continuously fed her your self, and tutor her the place the ideal grass is. Then, sooner or later you return residing house from college and she or he's no longer there. You ask your dad. She became slaughtered, so as that some individual ought to consume her. you have lost your ideal chum to a stupid concept that it rather is mandatory to consume meat. EH, lame occasion, yet i admire some thing alongside those traces.

  • 1 decade ago

    Start with a famous person's name and something they are doing in first sentence. Like "Steve Wonder stepped off the curb and was run over by a bus". Use a mild swear word in second sentence, but spell it wrong. I suggest Heil. Then write a sentence using a colon. Then write a sentence using a semi-colon. Teachers like it when you use punctuation properly, and effectively.

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