A sad love poem about lost love?

ok...I gave it a try~ hope it fits and it helps and gl~

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.....'Just so you know'......

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I sit here and wonder why

you chose to make me cry

by choosing her over me

when its so plain to see

I am the right one for you

and I know you know this too

but you dont wanna see

all the pain you have caused me

I really can not believe

your choice was just to leave

but know that I love you so

and will wherever you go

You hurt me with ur choice

I can still always hear ur voice

there is no one that can compare

and love you forever I do swear

So when you see the big mistake

and how she really is just a fake

when you realize you were wrong

and its with me you do belong

I'll be waiting for you its true

all because I do love you

and its with me you will find

that I am the true love you left behind.

Lost Love Poems For Him

Could not the day nor not the night nor the girl you chose 'stead I abate the love I have for thee. This love is not naive or false and can not cease 'till end of my beating pulse. No matter what you chose my heart is possessed by thee and will remain by thee. Forever faithful forever true will stay I and abide by.This cupid of mine shall tarry and sojourn with feelings carried through a thousand days and thousand nights the same of which can not tear my ever lasting love for thee.

The meter needs tightening up in places. It's full of concrete, specific description. Good. Rhyme scheme is basic, but effective. The use of modern vernacular along with traditional poetic tropes such as "ere" and "Hades" creates an interesting tonal frisson. 8/10

i am a poet. and its easy thing to do. you have to do it from the heart though not just random words. give me a email and ill see what i can do as i cant just think of one on the spot, it takes time

I think you should tell him in your words, not mine or anyone else's. If he doesn't take you, then he doesn't take you; you should move on. Also, it's rude to think of someone as "fat and ugly" as being below you. I'm just saying.

WHO I WANTED TO BE

I can feel it deep through my skin. Its a person i want to be.

It has my name and all of my dreams.

But then a dash of hurt goes through my heart.

It breaks my heart in two.............

and that dash is you.

You didn't let me be who i wanted to, you didnt let me try.

You didn't let me see how it felt to be...

LOVED

That's all i have on computer though... I have lots of sad ones but not on computer sorry.. hope i could sorta help...

Should I speak of love,

Let my feelings out?

should i dance & shout

I never thought I'd come to this.

What's it all about?

I don't know how to love him.

What to do, how to move him.

should i speak of love

should i speak of truth

If your slate is clean, then you can throw stones.

If your slate is not, then leave her alone.

is love really skin deep

can he really see me

does he feel as i feel

as weight in a keel

I never thought I'd come to this.

What's it all about?

for this first cut is the deepest

just write your feelings doesnt always have to rhyme