Hey, Guys!!!...Want some of your opinion again on the other song I wrote more than 10 years ago...?

Here's the Lyrics (of the still "untitled" song):

Every music that I hear

Every color that I see

Makes me wonder how much is Your love to me

And as I listen to the whisper

Of the wind as it blows

It says, You paint this world with beauty and love

Ref:

I'm thinking 'bout the words You've said

I'm thinking 'bout the things You did

And I prayed

Cho:

Lord, I'm not the man You wanted to be

But still I understand You're point of view

Sometimes I don't care too much about the place

The only space that You let us live

(Rep. Intro Chord Pattern w/ Progression)

(Adlib)

(Rep. Ref. and Cho. then fade)

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P.S.

btw this song is still unfinished (lyrics) and untitled until now but we finished arranging the musical accompaniment of it already...

Please don't hesitate to leave honest remarks...Thanks again!!!...