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intelex asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Feed back on my poem?

Many moons ago I had this poem published, but never really had an avenue to get feedback from anyone besides the editor. Thoughts?

It is only in the extremes of our lives,

From the most consuming depressions,

To to the most inspirational highs,

That we leave the drudgery and melancholy,

And realize we are truly alive.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    It is only in the

    From the

    To to the

    That we leave the

    And we we are

    Now, what can you show out of those lines I chopped as abstract?

  • ?
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    A to Z,the extremes make us Feel n' Reel the most! ....unless,of course you're a sociopath.

    Source(s): Been there,done that,now manic manic.
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Oooh, I love it!

    it's very insightful and intelligent.

    Source(s): I'm a huge poetry buff
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