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A pancake was tossed into the air
And where it lands I don't care
A can of mushrooms poured on top
And some green peppers, go get the mop
chop, chop, chop, chop..run downstairs and get the mop..
I had a horse, his name was sam
And every morning I fed him spam
Sam would eat and eat, until he popped
Run downstairs and get the mop
Chop, chop, chop, chop... run downstairs and get the mop
My next door neighbor is really scarey
He's got bad breath and his chest is hairy
When he sneezes, he just can't stop
Run downstairs and get the mop
chop, chop, chop, chop...run downstairs and get the mop
I saw a cop standing in the street
And the pancake at his feet
His shinney black shoes with peppers on top
Run downstairs and get the mop !
Chop, chop, chop, chop... run downstairs and get the mop
The judge was mad and so was the cop
30 days in the sweat shop!
30 days in the sweat shop!
chop, chop, chop, chop, chop........run downstairs and get the mop
6 Answers
- The Old CodgerLv 41 decade agoFavorite Answer
This poem has some great potential if worked on a little more. When one reads it it can sound very funny when the imagination is used as well. Really there is not need for the repeated breaks, I would take them out. You might like to think about adding as the last line "Cleaning the floor with a mop". If I might take the liberty, perhaps the 3rd line in the 2nd stanza could read ".....Until he'd pop". This would then rhyme with "pop" in the last line.
I found it to be quite amusing.
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