Is this poem any good?

so far its good :) its really meaningful which i personally like. I totally can agree with that, i persoanlly rather be told the truth then be left in the dark. Just keep thinking and writing, im sure youll think of something, maybe from your past or experiences? who knows, maybe ull be a famous poet one day lol :)

here is a few lines to finish this masterpiece you just wrote you can go Verbatim or just use ideas whatever you want the poem is great either way

maybe i should kiss

the lips of ignorance

and fall into the arms of bliss

but not knowing is more painful

If I know you hate me I will be OK

i will leave you where you stand

and walk away

I won't look back and i will go

Where ever the road without you takes me

If you Just tell me you hate me

There is plenty of feeling in it. Maybe you could make it a little less direct; more metaphorical.

Sounds depressing. If that's that you're aiming for, you're on the right track :)

this is really good so far you should use some of those lines "SUPREME" gave you there really good