What do you think of my flawfully rhymed poem?

hardest, roundest, sling and sing

your your and your, swing and sling

again and pen, try and try

If I missed any, hurl a rock! lol And not to forget alliteration: wield, words, whip

Words are only words in the end Elaine, are they not?

Your friend Richard, and Humpty took a swipe at me on his question. But it's all water off a ducks back. It's not worth getting upset or worrying about. I ain't gonna block Richard or Humpty and ask mean questions about them. I'm above that. I'm here because I enjoy poetry. People are always going to clash, and have differing opinions.

Richard wasn't happy with how I demmanded a certain answer; that's fair enough. I was being a bit picky I'll admit. We are only human afterall, not one of us are perfect. Just gotta move on and live and let live. That's all I can say. Peace.

Nice pen from you.

If it's flawed it's done so perfectly.

I really like it Elaine!

Keep em Coming!

Best Wishes.

Mars Mission.

14th Year Psychology / Counseling Student.

4th Year Hypnotism Student.

4th Year Music Composition Student.

32 Years Qualified Automotive Technician.

And Part Time Human Being.

Dog & Cat Lover.

I didn't see this as flawed or pointless and have been in the target zone many times.

Every stanza works for me but this one is what I'm gonna cling to, even as a mantra.

Oh, you missed, now try again,

Try it with an ink-filled pen,

Wear it down unto its nub,

Then go and cry alone.

Pick yo'se'f up off da flaw,

cuz dis be poifick, true

I like it when you write raw

and paint pithcer poifick points o' view!

*APPLAUSE*

I liked this very much. Flawfull it is not. (: Favorite couplet:

"Oh, you missed, now try again

Try it with an ink-filled pen"

Thanks for posting, (:

Mariah

That's really good and sounds familiar

more like awfully rhymed..