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Will you read one that isn't fiction?

UNBOXING THE POEM: A NON-POEM

by Elaine

I’ve read the classics, all of them

over a lifetime of reading poetry

and then I came upon the photons

weaving webs of words

smooth and flowing

tangled, jumbled

on a screen too bright

blinding tired eyes

before the Sun

showed his rays

above the horizon.

Some of the virtual poets

opened doors

others built walls

cages, boxes

and sometimes I heard

new words speaking

of universal themes.

And I had the arrogance

to proclaim myself

Poet, although

I knew at my core

that I would never

reach the summit

or soar above

the stratosphere.

And now, I sit

in an autumn kitchen

thinking of new times

and new places

and wondering

where I have been

and where I am

and where the

horizon ends.

Update:

I need to teach you about masc. and feminine nouns: mon "amie."

Update 2:

Ton anglais est excellent.

Update 3:

Caz, see? We both have the same problem. No one can give us a definition of poetry. What is poetry? This may be one of those unanswerable questions.

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  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    You have poet written all over your eyes

  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    That's a Beautiful poem Elaine!

    You are indeed a Poet as most know it!

    Good Luck.

    Best Wishes.

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  • 1 decade ago

    I'm not sure what poetry is, either. I think , in part, that it is all of life and how we choose to define it, describe it, report it. You are a poet.

  • 1 decade ago

    Elaine , I have read your poem over and over , and I really think its the nicest most honest piece I have ever had the pleasure to read

    Thank you :)

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Très bon, mon ami...

    However, I disagree. You are the poet.

    Source(s): * I don't speak some good Englicks neither...
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