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Will you read and c/c my edited Halloween poem?

A Wish In This Halloween Season

by Elaine

May the ghosts that haunt us

And the ghouls that taunt us

As they hide from truth and light

Crawl back to their graves,

With feeble waves

As sunrise conquers night,

And may tomorrow

Bring joy, not sorrow

As we open wide our eyes,

May our hearts’ desires

Though they burn like fires

Never be denied.

Update:

Neon! Moi? Write about the Yapooligans? Hmmm...

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  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    to never be overcome by the darknesses wherever they may be. Nice write.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Well Well,

    Who's a Happy Vegemite Poet!

    Writing so Brightly

    Neath The Moon and the Stars

    To Whom we belong

    A Poem some Damper

    Singing a Song of Love..

    Your a Top poet Elaine P..

    Best Wishes.

    Mars Mission. (Earth).

    14th Year Psychology Student.

    4th Year Hypnotism Student.

  • 4 years ago

    I whisper I attempt I kneel I sing I take a seat I actual have I wipe I stand I plead I turn i'm I whistle I walk I long I enjoyed I paint I’ll consistently I close there is not any place for a reader to work out or experience, it is all speaker orientated.

  • 1 decade ago

    These ghosts and ghouls are they distant relations of trolls? Sounds very much like it to me.

    .........is this verse reminiscent of Rabbie Burns? It reminds me of something, but annoyingly I cannot bring it to the front of my mind.

  • 1 decade ago

    I'll read nothin' into this and, with that, be most content!

    Lovely, lilting Halloween wish!

  • 1 decade ago

    Never be denied what, Elaine? Snicker bars....ha!

    Source(s): cocoa beans
  • 1 decade ago

    I sense some statement here, not pertaining to Yahoo is it? lol Well said with excellent rhyme.

  • 1 decade ago

    A good sentiment for this silly season!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Ha Ha!

    See above.

  • 1 decade ago

    Ah, a poem AGAINST the demons in this haunted season. Nice thoughts, Elaine. Thanks.

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