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Blind Eyes, please C/C my poem?
“Blind Eyes”
Trapped by walls of her house
His the sneaky
She might be the stupid mouse
Chaos, it’s too freaky
At what cost
Is her life?
Insides eaten by frost
Should it hurt to be his wife?
Queen size bed is her cage
Her face swollen from his rage
She sheds more tears than the rain
Forced to live her life in vain
Never ending, no way
Out of this hell
No words, nothing else to say
Save inside herself, lost in her shell
oh my first stanza is messed up. Sorry it should say:
Prisoner of her own house
Owned by a cat's paw
She's the helpless mouse
Beaten until raw
2 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
im not too fond of the first stanza. i mean its not worded all that well & it doesnt fit the overall atmosphere of the poem, but oh my, the rest of it!? fantastic! i love it! especially the "queen size bed is her cage" stanza. great! soo just change the poem if you want& it'lll be aaamazzinngg!
- a poeet.
