Can you review my punctuation?

If my name were a song, it would be "Blackbird," by The Beatles, because when I think about this song, I usually envision an actual blackbird(me) nestled into a tree viewing the sky above its head which is very dark and vastly unknown just waiting and waiting for the right moment to arise. That moment being when it is fully grown and matured and able to fly into the abyss to figure out what wouldn't be considered. Another reason I choose this song as metaphorical symbol for my name is because it always makes me feel like no matter what happens, one can learn to fly again(recover) and get through all the tough times one has gone through and overcome your past.

Thanks!