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I'm working on a poem & having problems with the flow of it. Any help would be welcome. the start is as follow?

You turn key...ignition...spark

heading for a trail of matter dark

a magic, minus the method mission

onto the freeway...Superstition

Hit the tarmac...bottomless abysmal black

12 lanes of rattlesnake mean aggression

...attack

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    1 decade ago
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    The lines of metal going slack,

    The front of metal into back -

    Superstition is collision.

    No I've run out of steam. Maybe it'll give you some ideas. It's looking good until I came in - worth working on. Best of luck.

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