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Can you give me some constructive criticism?
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Jordyn_Ruhter/6...
I know this is a bit of a long read but can you guys give me some criticism on what I've written? Click "Next Chapter" at the bottom of each page to advance to the next chapter.
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- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
I like the way that you have each person have there own little prologue. I tells you right off who are the main characters of your book and it deals with something of the main elements. I think maybe you should have a little bit more going with Joshua's story sort of like explaining a little bit more on the surroundings. It just seems a little bit too short. I really like it. I'm on writerscafe.org myself and love it. I'll follow you and see how your book is coming along. I'll probably review and give a little bit more criticism later. But great job so far.
Source(s): librarian
