Any editing tips on my intro?

Ok, Im back! :o)

I watch a few more videos on your channel and it seems like the music doesnt match your channel. Like, your channel is all pink and your avatar is a colorfull pony so maybe something a little more happier. But the video that goes with it defenatly does. You have 3 showing videos which reflects a big part of your channel and then a pretty horse! I love palomino's!

Then for your font. I like it for the second part after "a" but I think the "a" should be uppercase like this kind of A. But in that font if they have it. If not, something close.

I really liked it though, those were just some personal comments and things I thought could make it even better! Good job!

P.S- I subbeddd!!!

What came up was just a 12 second intro so I hope that is what you want us to critique.

The initial music with the jumper is very jarring; it actually is rather startling instead of easing someone into the clip. I would change the black screen with strong music to a few seconds of a quieter intro and a more peaceful horse scene, like a pasture, dressage, etc., then move on.

My instant response was to back off of the computer and reach for the volume to tone it down; so I do not think you want viewers or customers to do that.

Chris Cox.