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is this poem good?????????suggest me some ideas please.......?

getting up in the damn cold

seeing right and left and everything is olde

searching my phone all over the jungle

and should rush up in this world of huddle

my clock shows half past ten

and i am dumb struck thinking what to do then

sitting with a hot mug of coffee in this freak of nature

planning to what to do in future

finally i take my pen and write my poem

and may be you can this as hokum

but my future is to write poems........................

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  • 1 decade ago
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    paint a picture to involve your readers. be more specific.

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