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A young teenager, seventeen, is shipped off to a prestigious boarding school just outside of Riquewhir, France in the summer of 1894. She's rich, beautiful, and well known which immediately puts her on the bad side of the girls at school. Making only three friends, Anna, Maria, and Loise, Lili attends school. But as soon as she comes back from Winter Leave, Lili finds a picture of four of the most beautiful girls at school fluttering down a hallway. They a sitting in front of a banner that reads "The Queen's Society.". The group is wearing beautiful gowns and all four of them lok very happy. So Lili continues life at school, wasting away through boorish lessons on English, mathematics, and science, she begins to realize (through the actions of the four girls from the pictures) that a secret club has been formed at her school. She confronts the girls and is immediately pulled into the club by them to keep the secret. The Queen's Society is a group of ten girls who change the lives of the people at school. From boys, to money, and even to friends, the ten girls have ere ways. But nothing happens without a price. The desperate girls of Lili's boarding school are being wasted by the society. And The Queen's Society has much, much more planned.