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I liked it. After reading it once, I tried reading all the lines starting at the bottom and going up. I liked it better that way, I'm not sure why. Try it, and maybe consider switching some of the lines around.

It's good. You've got the art of expressing yourself down pact. You have promising talent. But I do have some suggestions:

"Annoyed by the feeling of wanting to be alone" and "I ponder great questions and hide much fear" keep the same idea, but "What I hate is what I be" breaks that flow. Maybe you should move that line down just before the line that says "Well, what am I?" That'll keep the flow.

"What I hate is what I am" is grammatically correct, but "What I hate is what I be" is not. But that doesn't always matter in poetry, so that's optional. But "What I hate is what I am" does flow better.

"A B|tch or a princess living in a castle?" -- B|tch and princess have nothing in common; no similarities. The main idea you imply here is a fairy tale. Try replacing b|tch with wicked witch.

Hope I helped. :]

Get a friend who makes music/ play guitar to put a melody behind it whilst you sing it.

Umm do a grammar check and I liked it backwards too (like the other girl said)