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Do these sentences make sense/how can I improve them?
I'm trying to write an essay and I was wondering if the following made sense:
History will show us that humans are prideful beings. Early humans built grand monuments as a symbol of architectural superiority, technological prominence and to parade economic fortunes.
How can I improve them?
It's just a topic sentence (s)
Thank you in advance.
1 Answer
- 𝔸𝕪𝕒𝕕Lv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
history is the past,you can not use ''will'' here.you can say -history showed us-.
use ''proud'' instead of ''prideful''
