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i need help with a poem?
is this ok? Should I change any of it? any suggestions? thanks in advanced :)
Just another face
Just another face
Feeling misplaced
In this world full of the unknown
All you feel is that you are alone.
Just another face
Who can make a difference
But scared to try
So you put yourself on stand by
Just another face
Walking in the hallway
Passing all your friends
You smile and wave
But you get no reply.
Just another face
Starting to realize
That you need to move on
Try to figure what’s holding you back
And learn how to move forward
And learn from the past
Just another face
Who will find her place
in this world full of the unknown
And who will never feel alone
Just because your another face.
yea, i'm not liking the last two stanzas, anybody having any ideas what it should be :)
2 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
I think it's a really good poem..if you were wanting each paragraph to rhyme you might want to change the 3rd and 4th paragraph but if you weren't it's a great poem
- Anonymous1 decade ago
The poem had a good message, but the rhyme scheme is not my favorite. On the 4th stanza, I think you should keep to the 4 lines. Good job though!
