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Do you think this is a good cover letter without giving the wrong impression?
I am a beautiful, intelligent and educated administrative assistant. I possess my bachelors degree and am currently looking for full time employment as an assistant or receptionist. I have over 5 years experience and am very friendly reliable and will make my boss feel very special! please review my resume!
3 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
hey, everything's good except for the " make my boss feel special" that sounds wrong! good luck
- ?Lv 71 decade ago
First of all, leave off the beautiful and for heaven's sake remove "will make my boss feel very special". These statements will give the wrong impression. This is business and whereas you want to come across as pleasant, you need to focus on what you will bring to the position. Convey what makes you the best person for the job.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
I would speak more about my education and experience. Instead of saying, "I'm intelligent," say something about your degree, or your GPA or past experience. I would leave out the "beautiful" part.
