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An easy 2 points for your opinion :)?

So I have an idea for a novel and I just want your opinion on if you would read it or not. All you need to write is a yes, no or maybe so :) but if you have the time or are just a nice person write me some detail :D

The basic plot line is:

A 15/16 yo girl lives with her mum on a cattle station with another family and helps run it. Her dad left when she was 3 and she hadn't seen him since. He leaves to protect his family because he hunts demons and he tried to lead them away (the main doesn't know this). She has lots of friends and is very smart.The annual rodeo in the local town is on one weekend and she competes like usual. blah blah blah Her dad shows up and tells her and her mum that they are in great danger, her mum tells him that he lead them there and leaves with daughter. that night her mum is killed and her dad takes her away and teaches her how to defend herself and stuff. Its pretty much going to be about her dealing with her mums death and meeting her father as someone she never expected to be. and then she fights have a normal life. She is always the new kid and is different to other students and finds it hard to make friends. She's always having to lie, even the friends she makes don't know her real name. She finally meets a guy at another school and they start dating even though she is only going to be there for a few weeks. when it is time for her and her dad to move on she refuses and runs away with the guy. her dad finds them and takes her back. a couple of months pass and she gets a message saying that the guy she had been with has been kidnapped by a demon to get to her and her father. and then they try to bust him out. and happily ever after.

Please take the time to read this, you cannot fathom how much it would mean to me to comment your opinion even if you say it absolutely sucks.

x

Update:

@Moselle C - Thanks, I haven't read those books and I definitely want mine to be original so I'll change it up a bit :D

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  • 1 decade ago
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    In a way, the beginning plot line has a lot of the same elements as The Mortal Instruments series by Cassandra Clare (as do the last few elements). That being said, there are enough differences that it would probably make a decent story.

    It might resonate more authentically if you took out the demon hunter stuff and simply made it about her dealing with her mom's death while getting to know her dad.

  • quaas
    Lv 4
    5 years ago

    Angelina Jolie: I provide her a 9, she's quite,yet not appealing Jessica Alba: Ten! She is appealing! Micha Barton: 6, She isn't grotesque Shakira: 8, i like her hair and her skin tone

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