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you are so clueless,
i spend all my time thinking about you,
you spend your time thinking about her,
i know you know i know,
so why do you act so clueless?
you say you love me,
but do you tell her that to?
i cry at the thought,
but your not here to comfort me,
time goes to slowly till the next day when i can see you,
why do i look forward to seeing you,
i ask myself this question daily,
no answer comes to me,
i have to stop the pain,
so the next time i see you,
ill say goodbye.
dont be clueless,
 you know what this means,
now copy me,
 and say it too.

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

awwww it has feelings of a girl who is sad because her "lover" loves someone else. i truly understand the poem, it's great. you should title it, thats all you need to do, if you haven't already:)

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alexandra · Answer

Aww :( this makes me sad because i think everyone goes through something like this at least once in their life! I really like the poem....i can feel your emotions when i'm reading it! Good job! and good luck!

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this is very lovely and sweet poem.you expressed your feeling so nicely.thanks for this good poem.

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