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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

advice on fixing a poem and having inputs on some areas that doesnt seem right?

I have like a rhyme on the first part if I could get some help making the other endigs rhyme that would be great if not that's fine.can you help me in fixing parts you think doesn't agree with the rest of the poem and maybe trying tho have the length larger? Please and thank you. Try not to be mean if you don't like it I'm a newbie thanks.

Tell me the meaning of being together

if you keep running forever

I don't understand

what is the purposeof loving Eachother?

Because everyday I wonder.

as the days go by the ideas that I can't escape you

gets driven in further

don't turn away

you have to take responsibility

For thi fool has fallen for you..

Is. Bit odd I know but it would be great if you could help and heve inputs on how I could change it a bit

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  • ?
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    1 decade ago
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    this is a beautiful poem.i liked it .its a good poem.thanks for this nice poem.

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