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a short poem, please rate it.?
Oh why will she not come?
I await until deep in the night.
Oh how my mind does run.
No sleep,No rest, what a plight!
I beg my eyes to shut,
God please let me rest.
I'm stuck in this tiresome rutt.
It's upon me like a tigress,
a regular saboteur.
Go away and let me sleep.
oh how irregular!
I count the sheep!
But still she does not come.
oh damn tormenteur.
A glass of wine, a shot of rum!
warm milk or a sleeping pill.
Tranquillizer or a knockout punch .
anything to beat this Ill.
I am not asking for a bunch,
just a simple wish,
that I could sleep through the night .
For my mind to hush,
and sleep until the light.
Insomnia let me sleep,
You are so Inhumane,
Rest let me reap,
Before I go insane.
2 Answers
- ?Lv 51 decade agoFavorite Answer
this is a beautiful poem.i liked it very much.you expressed your feelings so nicely.thanks for this good poem.10/10
- 1 decade ago
i think some of the rhymes used in this poem have been used too forcibly.... for example
Oh why will she not come?
I await until deep in the night.
Oh how my mind does run.
No sleep,No rest, what a plight!
it just seems kinda forced to me
as for a poem i'd say this is okay, nothing special, but not too bad.