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what do you think of this poem?

I lay down in a sea of a saddness

the sun shines down onto me

im cloaked in warmth in security

im drowning in doubt and uncertainty

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  • HimJoy
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
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    Simple , beautiful, picturesque and powerful ! Only if the sadness was not overwhelming, I would have compared it to Wordsworth.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    You srsly sound depressed! love da poem..but you gottaaa have some fun...dont just sit at home makin' super sad poems!!!!!!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    i like it its kinda sad yes but i like the emotion you managed to put into it with you words!

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