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what do you think of this poem?
She is sweet like honey
the taste makes my body jump with excitement
my heart begins to beat loudly
as the honey touches my lips
feels sweet to be right
4 Answers
- bijjaLv 51 decade agoFavorite Answer
This proves that you can write poems well.
Stretch your imagination and write some more.
Edit as many as you think until you cannot further edit it, then it becomes a wonderful poem.
Poetry is an art. You can craft the words to make a fine poem.
Source(s): Would you please read my poems here: http://www.wikinut.com/spilled-words/54sx94pe/20ay... http://www.wikinut.com/thorns/20lf__ox/13xn9bfb/ http://www.wikinut.com/butterflies-that-flutter-by... - Anonymous1 decade ago
It is ok but that is just my unimportant opinion but someone else will love it
Is it a love poem x
It's like Shakespeare x
Source(s): My unimportant self x - Anonymous1 decade ago
it is awesome remember not all poems have to rhyme. i am sure somebody will love it!
- Anonymous1 decade ago
good but try a bit more rhymes
