can you check out my online poems, pick one and give your harshest criticisms if possible?

I've just read 'space and time', one of your 'love' poems.

Just a question: is 'your' intentionally spelt as 'ur'? If so, then it is completely fine with me as it adds more chracter to the way you are writing. If not, I seriously recommend you spell words the right way because being too lazy to type a few extra letters will not be good for you or your poetry.

In terms of the actual poem, I reckon it is really well written out; only with a few small tweaks and kinks that doesn't seem to suit the rest of the lines. each stanza is well written out and I think the way you put your words together are just amazing.

I can actually relate to this poem, it is composed so well - I really believe it is just the small things such as some repeated words/phrases that stops the flow.

Well done and I hope my opinions don't insult, upset you in any way :)