How is my story plot so far?

Characters:

Aerith Roka:

Appearance-

Aerith has dark golden eyes framed by thick black lashes. Black hair is chopped short and bangs fall around her eyes. Her hair is usually tied back by a bandana or other type of headband or ribbon. Her skin is suntanned, and her nose is freckled by the sun as well. She wears a black tunic, leggings, and a sword scabard on her left hip. She is left handed. Her boots are black leather and go up to her knees, a thick silver cord is twisted around them holding a small silver dagger.

Personality-

Aerith is quick to anger, and has problems with self restrainment (especially when angered). She is a female warrior for her King & Queen, and many do respect her, some, however do not, especially due to the fact that they think it's improper for a girl to be a warrior, they also dislike her temper. She would never have been let to join combat if she wasn't one of the few left of her kind, who are needed for the war efforts. A were-cat, half human, half cat. She often disregards rules & orders, but she is a good warrior. Aerith can be charasmitic but her temper can often overide her charisma.

Archer:

Appearance-

Archer has very dark hair, and has very dark brow eyes framed by thick lashes as well. He has a pale skin-tone and sharp features. Archer is very lean and tall.

Personality-

Archer is very quiet, and only speaks when he has something to say. He is second in line for the throne, his elder brother being first, often when he was little, he was ignored due to this fact, or talked to so people could get close to the future king. So none know his secret. Archer is a fire speaker, he can control fire. Since he was little he speaked the launguage, and taught himself.

Salem:

Appearance-

Salem is small, pale, and petite. Her eyes are a shade of very light green, and they are framed by golden lashes. Her skin is unfreckled and she has blonde curls that fall down her back. She is often mistaken for an elf, a creature of the forest.

Personality-

Salem was brought up in the palace of a small kingdom, she is the Queen's third daughter. She is shy, softspoken, and very quiet. She can't fight, but she is smart. She has always been pampered. Salem is very sweet, but if angered enough will put up a fight. She follows all the rules.

Customs of Salem's Kingdom:

Her kingdom is ruled by a govern of three, the Queen who makes the overall decision of new rules, if to put someone to death or other punishment (only for criminals who are of importance to her), etc. The Queen's advisor (usually male for balance), and the Queen's eldest daughter who in this time learns what it's like to be Queen, the daughter usually joins in with helping at age 13. If there is no daughter by the time the Queen is past child birth they take in the closest female relative. The daughter & advisor help her make her decisions and are the only ones who are informed of the problem, new rule, criminal trial, etc. The Queen often marries her advisor, but it does not have to happen. She doesn't have to marry at all, and can take on the closest relative's daughter or even pick her own child to teach if she see's fit.

Archer's kingdom customs:

Archers kingdom is mainly constitutional monarchy, with a few tweaks of my own here & there. :)

The forest exception:

It goes without saying that no kingdom owns the forest. The forest is filled with elves, knomes, goblins, fae (fairies), it also used to be filled with were-beings like were-cats but may of these creatures have gone extinct. Aerith is one of the few left. only gypsys like to venture into it. Some travelers, however do travel through the edge of it. A few of these creautures do enjoy living among humans.

Goarvault (Sorta an exception):

Goarvault came into power by circumstance, he took over the Kingdom of Crevauna. He then, in greed, wants all the other Kingdoms. He is violent, greedy, and awful, he was basically the man who put the Were-beings to extinction. Including Aerith's parents. He is after Archer's Kingdom next.

Plot:

OK! So basically Goarvault decides he wants Archer's kingdom, in haste to protect Archer & Aerith the King & Queen make Aerith Archer's guard, and lock away Archer's older brother so he's safe. They make an alliance with Salem's Kingdom which has so far stayed neutral, in order to assure it they set Archer and Salem up in an arranged marriage this mollifies the Queen who didn't want to alliance becaus if Archer's elder brother dies, they get some power over that Kingdom. Archer though, falls in love with Aerith, & Aerith with him. Salem & Aerith don't get along... and Salem doesn't understand why. In an odd twist it turns out that Salem is a fire speaker as well. She was not actually the Queen's daughter, and was at first raised in the forest where many speakers are. So learning this Archer & Aerith run away to the forest in search o