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is this a good rhyme and concept?

im the word spittin word smitten author

pullin words like swords from the ground like king arthor

unearthin' pun's puns...or big's verbosity

or big L's lyrical ferocity a monstrosity

a menace to the earth...they should lock me up

the way i influence the fluid like a cold cup

that went over ya head or under ur pen

who cares...? me greatness gets under ur skin...

dont worry though...im not tryin to get paid for rhymes

im just tryin to get layed by time...empregnatin'

fate...im just tryin to seal the deal with destiny

smokin" awesome" and gettin high off "hate"...

watch me...like rocky how i pound the steps to my goal

given the pen the keys to my soul

every body got a dream a light...but mines' light strobe

speratic...an addict...to my zone

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  • 1 decade ago

    hiii ! let me say im a female rapper and i think that is preety hott. it reminds me of sumthinq drake wud say. koodools to u. idk if ur a boy or qirl but qreat job . if you chosse rappinq as ur career work hard never qiive up for getwat tha haters talk cuz at tha end of tha day u qot skill for rapp and all they have is skill to hate !!!!!!!

    Source(s): my head
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Pretty Ill dogg.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
  • 1 decade ago

    lol brah it's sporadic

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