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1998 - Trail of Broken Beer Bottles?
1998
That trail of broken beer bottles
Will lead you to my passed out body
On a city bus bench
On the edge of a boisterous sunrise
As the beggar plays his wooden guitar
He does not attend Church this Sunday
He stands outside a store
Where my body lays near
He is old and slightly shaking
He remembers his castle and young wife
She used to wear a red rose in her hair
That resembled a single starburst
That could light up the entire galaxy
With its vibrant shimmer
He remembers her dark eyes
And how they shone as they met
Secretly in an aristocrats garden
And vowed eternal love
As the gathering of people around them
Disappeared in the glistening
Of their hearts pirouetting together
He opens his mouth to sing
Each gentle guitar strum
With his ancient fingers
Is bigger than everyone
That meets him with indifference
& pity
Each sung word
Carries her memory
In his hushed breath
His eyes beaming with years
Of tears never uncurled
The wind carries those rose petals
She wore so majestically in her hair
Into his soul
He can sense her scent
As his voice sings to her elsewhere
He sings only for her
The spears puncturing deep
The microphone crackles
As his words become bolts of lightning
Inflicting a sense of loss
As my head lifts up from the cathedral of washed up dreams
His voice carrying me
To follow the busted beer bottle glass
Back to the home
Where I dreamed of meeting a girl
With a flower in her hair
That could make me sing forever
Just with the celestial fireworks
Of her slowly materializing smile.
6 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Not bad, not bad at all. If I were you I'd break it up just a little, pust a few stanzas in, but otherwise I very much enjoyed this! Also, I'd remove some of the capital letters so it seems to flow better, but that is just personal choice.
'The microphone crackles/ as his words become bolts of lightning' - excellently put.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Sits on Pigtails lap looks sadly at Spandey and smiles even more weirdly
- Anonymous5 years ago
Schiesse
- 1 decade ago
Did you write that? Because that was amazing! Your next task is to write about the Temperance Movement.
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
(Wipes a tear away) That was simply beautiful.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
<----smiles weirdly