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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

An "I am" poem....c/c?

I am the center of my own attention in

a world too suddenly devoid of a

landmark with which to find my

way. The terrain is alien to

my comfort zone and I focus

inward spiraling to an

ever decreasing

pinpoint

of reference. my horizon

drawing nearer and my

peripheral vision

clouded.

I am.

Update:

no...this is not where I am "at"...life is still sweet =)

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    I

    am

    a dot

    circling

    outwards,

    the pinnacle

    of self amidst

    the sands of no

    name no place no

    hope no comfort just

    a horizon of reference

    for the wayfarer to chart

    a course into vast oblivion.

    Source(s): That what you were trying to do?
  • 1 decade ago

    I am

    being me

    being all that I am

    being.

    I feel

    most surely

    and think most clearly

    and know most fully

    I am.

    I am

    the all within

    that central point

    the all without

    all.

    I am.

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    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    To anyone who has felt this way,

    this poem hits right to the heart,

    I found myself nodding, saying, yes,

    that's exactly how it feels.

    and then, praying it's NOT how you feel

    hugs

    Edit: Whew! GOOD!

  • 1 decade ago

    Just beautiful!

    I can relate.

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