Can you give me an oppinion about my resume?

There are some terrible spelling mistakes. A bar owner is a busy guy and they do not have time to look at your resume. You must catch there attention. You can see some FREE bartending resume examples here at http://www.bars-and-bartending.com/bartender-resum...

It also includes how to dress, what to expect and what to say/not to say. Like "I haven't been to jail yet" or "mom had me vaccinated when I was a kid". Don't tell them when your were unemployed, and one summer you learned to drive a fork lift. anyways here's the link, it's very helpful and you need lots of help. http://www.bars-and-bartending.com/how-to-become-a...

You need to shorten it a lot.

Leave out the d.o.b., driver's license #, clean record, can pass drug test, up to date on shots, the pics, and lots of the rest - leave out the languages unless they relate to the job you're applying for. Spanish might be, Polish not so likely. If you're in a country where English is the main language, then it's assumed. Only mention the boating license if it pertains to the job you're applying for, same with the soccer. Also the certifications and training.

I'd leave out the "About me" section, maybe leaving in the preferred work times.

Leave off the references. If they want them they'll ask - AFTER an interview. And if they do, use full names.

Leave off the "goals and plans for the future", at least except for things directly relevant to the job you're applying for. I'd leave that section out.

The stuff I left out is NOT things an employer will want to see in a resume.

try this:

Resume

Name: Jane Doe

Contact phone number: (555)555-5555

E-mail: M31n3z3w5k1@aol.com

Languages: read and write basic Spanish, speak Spanish

Education: Middletown High, graduated 2005

Manchester Community College, actively enrolled, 9 credits completed

Training and certifications:

CNA certified, CPR certified, S.M.A.R.T. certified, forklift trained

Employment history:

2002: baby sat for 2 children

2003: 4 star restaurant, Moe's restaurant, route 16 Portland CT, waitress server part time weekends, 8 months

2005: Tony's pizza, Hartford rd Manchester CT, line cook pizzas, grinders, waitress, answer phone, some cleaning

2006: Exclusive lines, Sears, Burger king, Shell gas

2007: Sears,

Job Description: J.C. Penny logistics Warehouse

2008 J.C. Penny logistics Warehouse, Shaw's Osco

2009: Coleman brothers Amusements, Savin Rock Amusements, J.C. Penny Warehouse

I prefer to work evenings after 6, nights, and weekends

My goals and plans for the future:

"In the near future I plan to go back to college and get a degree in the medical field possibly LPN/Nurse or Nationalist/ Dietitian /PHD in Holistic medicine" (if related to job you're applying for - you do know that a PhD takes years to get? And "nationalist" - do you mean "naturalist"?

OR

"I plan to do some more schooling to become more familiar with mixing drinks and drink names" if you're applying for a bartender job.

Your Resume is lengthy and descriptive so make it short.

The main section of resume are as follow :-

Objective

Qualification

Skills

Work Experience

Contact Information

Remove unnecessaryily information that doesn't require for job you are applying for it like can pass drug test,driving licences information.You can mention your work experience,technical skills like CNA and CPA Certification and in short about you.

You should follow following format:-

Contact Information:-

Name:-

Email Id:-

Ph.No:-

Objective:-

Oualification:-

Technical Skills:-

Work Experience:-

Personal Information:-

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