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Hey, does anyone find this interesting? (Warning: really long)?
I'm currently done in writing a book, and I'm wondering if anyone would find it interesting.
I am aiming to publish it.
Sorry if this is a bit unorganized. This is yahoo, so I'm not aiming for perfection.
In the year 2541 A.D., humanity has completely ruined the planet. Three factions existed in a cold war. The Allied Powers, Central Powers, and Brand Powers. The Central Powers (America) tried to create medicine created a mutagenic virus. A massive quake tore the laboratory apart, releasing it into the atmosphere. Things got so bad they had to abandon Earth for about 257 years, in which the virus changed the world greatly. Now there are hundreds of mutated, intelligent life forms who roam the planet. Humanity lands, and takes over. They force all these mutants into Asia, claiming the rest of the planet for themselves.
In 1148 P.C., there was the discovery of Zeta Radiation, which has the ability to distort reality in high amounts. It is a volatile, dangerous, useful, and powerful energy source that is in extremely hazardous in even untraceably low doses.
The current year in the novel is 2594 P.C. (Post Calamity). The previous year, 2593, is nothing more than pieces of lost memory to people. Everyone knows a World War occured, but the real facts are obscure. Most remember, however, that a 13 year old mecernary was responsible for ending the war. She, in the current year, set up a nation of mercenaries out in the Pacific.
By the way: There only a few factions left in he world
Vatican: holy soldiers
Spain: caught in a civil war
Conage: a weak, independant African nation
Nuba Nam: home to mercenaries
China: a off-Earth civilization
S.O.H.A.: a corporate company that owns most of the world.
Terrorist organizations
The Marines: they refused to buckle under the S.O.H.A., and now resist the whole world.
Karabs: stronger form of the Russian KGB.
Sin Spawn: a mysterious organization that no one really understands.
Through out the story, the main character (the 13 yr old girl) becomes a interest of Sin Spawn's leader. He sends various members of the organization to die by her hands so he could really grasp her ability. During this, she takes a mission into Conage that angers the whole government. Spain and China don't wat to deal with her, so they reject their treaties with Conage. The S.O.H.A. has a current "agreement" with the girl, and keep away. Vatican always wanted her dead and wait for the proper moment to strike. The Karabs become interest with the new nation, Nuba Nam and plan to test its mettle with them. The Marines had pass dealing with the main character, and want revenge.
So Nuba Nam is attacked by the Marines, Karabs, Vatican, Conage, and Sin Spawn.
They all start attacking each other, and it becomes a real bloody conflict. Nuba Nam manages to hold strong, keeping ground as the other armies tear each other apart.
The main character: she changes throughout the story.
On missions: serious, controlled, desensitive.
At Nuba Nam: playful, well-humored, kind.
When in a tough fight: dark, cold, foul humored.
Despite it all, she loves to manipulate and control others, enough to the point that some worship her as a messaih (she disapproves though). She does not run Nuba Nam. She hates politics and leaves such matters to her Lieutenant.
She isn't human, but of a race that mutated from humans (mutagenic virus). Because she isn't human, most believe she can't go to heaven, even if she has a soul. She shares no rights as humans do.
When she was younger, she was named heir to the military title of her father, and her elder brother view it as an outrage. He pursued her down to the lowest level of her family's estate. There she encountered the sourceof her family's power, a Zeta radiation construction that is tied into six seals where powerful (mortal) beings were contained. This construct fused with her, and with it she killed her brother.
At points in the novel, she sneaks out into the world for very "enthusiastic" walks, most of which end violently as she purposefully strolls into dangerous areas.
On these one walk she encounters a town being infected with a viral race (mutagenic race). She finds a police officer who is nearly dead, and offers the police officer life at a price. She infects the police officer with a different viral race, and the police officer is treated like a mere minion.
She encounters a robotic construction with split personalities who she enjoys messing with. Manipulating the personalities is fun for her.
She encounters another Zeta construct, who is very powerful, but an @$$hole.
And finally she encouners a superhero wannabe.
Throughout the story, they are manipulated into real soldiers who decimate many of the invading soldiers.
Notes:
All names have been picked out.
The storyline is already identified.
All dialogue has been finalized.
All weapons are named aptly.
Opini
3 Answers
- Anonymous10 years agoFavorite Answer
No.
- ritzerLv 44 years ago
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- 10 years ago
I just finished reading it but it's an interesting story line. I would buy it most definitely. critique mine?